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Old 01-28-2023, 12:21pm   #20
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Originally Posted by Yadkin View Post
I can see where one could be confused with my sloppy language in the first sentence. But the use of the "his" and "him" in the following sentences should have cleared that up for the reader.
Source of confusion:

Friend
Single mom
Good looking in 80s
5 year gig
multi seven figures
They
His

Fix all that and it should be good to go
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